We went to visit Dad. He looked so weak and helpless. I started crying. I know crying doesn't make anything better but I couldn't help it. If you've ever seen you Dad, sick and sad and half-alive, you'd understand. The thought of him not being with me for the rest of my life was just so unbearable, that the tears came like a natural instinct. Aren't tears a natural instinct actually? Well, duh. Everybody cries. "Hitori?" My dad asks half-heartedly. "Y-yes Daddy?" "Is Uchi with you?" He asks. He shouldn't be talking so much, it's probably not good for him. He coughs. " I might not make it. And, if I don't, Uchi, take good care of Hitori for me. And I need both of you to be strong for me. It's not gonna be easy but I know you two can handle it." My Dad barely managed to say. " Dad, I can't afford to think like that!" said Uchi. This wasn't easy for either of us. But I still believed Dad would stay with us forever. Uchi was doubtful. He completely thought Dad was a goner. And there's nothing I could do about that. Dad started coughing uncontrollably.BEEP BEEP BEEP. Dad's blood pressure was rising The nurse escorted us out of the room. "I LOVE YOU DAD!!!!" I managed to yell out before the door closed. If those were my last words I wouldn't have been regretful.
Note from the Author:
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WHOEVER FINDS THE HUNGER GAMES REFERENCE GETS 10 INTERNET POINTS!






When u a person is talking and u dont know who's talking, at he end of their first sentence then u put a comma instead of a period.
EXAMPLE:
"Let's go get a hamburger or something," Gracie says, "I'm hungry!"
or
"Katie said she hated you," Jonah says, "I just said 'yeah ok'. She's sooo mean."